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Community Mental Health Journal (2021) 57:1094–1110
https://doi.org/10.1007/s10597-020-00735-z

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O R I G I N A L PA P E R

Randomized Controlled Trial of an Integrated Family‑Based Treatment
for Adolescents Presenting to Community Mental Health Centers

Ashli J. Sheidow1 · Kristyn Zajac2 · Jason E. Chapman1 · Michael R. McCart1 · Tess K. Drazdowski1

Received: 14 May 2020 / Accepted: 23 October 2020 / Published online: 29 October 2020
© Springer Science+Business Media, LLC, part of Springer Nature 2020

Abstract
Most adolescents presenting to community mental health centers have one or more comorbidities (internalizing, externalizing,
and substance use problems). We evaluated an integrated family-based outpatient treatment for adolescents (OPT-A) that can
be delivered in a community mental health center by a single therapist. A sample of 134 youth/families were randomized to
receive OPT-A or usual services, delivered at the same public sector mental health center. Repeated, multi-informant assess-
ments occurred through 18-months post-baseline. At baseline, the sample displayed low internalizing symptoms, moderate
substance use, and high externalizing problems. Compared to usual services, OPT-A had effects on abstinence rates, retention,
motivation, parent involvement, and satisfaction, but not on internalizing or externalizing problems. While OPT-A achieved
some key improvements for youth who present to community mental health centers, and families were satisfied with treat-
ment, continued work is necessary to examine treatments for comorbidity while balancing treatment feasibility and complex
strategies to boost treatment effectiveness.

Keywords Comorbidity · Adolescent substance use · Adolescent mental health · Community-based treatment · Family
therapy

The majority of adolescents presenting for outpatient treat-
ment at public sector community mental health centers have
comorbid symptoms such as internalizing, externalizing, and
substance use problems, but there is a striking paucity of

experimental treatment research on integrated psychosocial
treatments for these teens (Hogue et al. 2018; Hulvershorn
et  al. 2015). In general, multicomponent treatments that
have been found to effectively target each of these present-
ing problems (e.g., cognitive behavioral therapy [CBT],
behavioral family-based treatment, motivational enhance-
ment) tend to be most effective for treating substance use
and comorbid disorders simultaneously (Brewer et al. 2017).
However, research in this area is still limited by very few
well-powered randomized controlled trials; and, of these,
most are very limited (e.g., substance use and depres-
sion only), are sequential or parallel treatment rather than
integrated (i.e., requires attendance at two or more sepa-
rate treatments), and are not representative of the range of
adolescents seen in public sector community mental health
centers.

Over 4 million U.S. adolescents use illicit drugs each
year, and over 1 million are in need of treatment for sub-
stance use (SAMHSA 2018). Tens of thousands of U.S.
youth receive some form of addiction treatment services
each year, the vast majority of which occur in outpatient
community-based clinics (SAMHSA 2018). An estimated
60% of teens with substance use problems have a comorbid

Electronic supplementary material The online version of this
article (https ://doi.org/10.1007/s1059 7-020-00735 -z) contains
supplementary material, which is available to authorized users.

* Kristyn Zajac
[email protected]

Ashli J. Sheidow
[email protected]

Jason E. Chapman
[email protected]

Michael R. McCart
[email protected]

Tess K. Drazdowski
[email protected]

1 Oregon Social Learning Center, 10 Shelton McMurphey
Blvd., Eugene, OR 97401, USA

2 University of Connecticut School of Medicine, 263
Farmington Avenue, Farmington, CT 06030, USA

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mental health diagnosis, with comorbid externalizing dis-
orders being the most common (up to 50%; Armstrong and
Costello 2002; Couwenbergh et  al. 2006). Internalizing
disorders (i.e., mood or anxiety) are also prevalent (up to
30%; Armstrong and Costello 2002). Approximately half
of adolescents presenting for outpatient treatment for either
substance use or internalizing disorders exhibit both (e.g.,
Stephens et al. 2014; Turner et al. 2004). A number of mod-
els have been proposed as explanations for this comorbid-
ity among youth (e.g., the self-medication model, common
factor model, bi-directional model), but no definitive model
has been accepted by the field (Kaminer and Winters 2020).
Regardless of the underlying reasons for the link between
disorders, it is well established that youth with comorbid
substance use and mental health problems present with more
familial, school, and legal problems than adolescents with
substance use problems alone (Grella et al. 2001). It is not
surprising that clinicians in public sector community mental
health centers are tasked with treating complicated youth
presentations.

Furthermore, youth with comorbid disorders are at par-
ticular risk for negative outcomes. For example, Copeland
et al. (2007) found that youth with anxiety and substance
use were 11 times more likely to engage in severe or vio-
lent offending, and youth with depression and substance
use were nearly 15 times more likely compared to youth
without psychiatric and behavioral problems. Youth with
internalizing and externalizing symptoms are also consist-
ently found to be at increased risk for initiating substance
use earlier (e.g., Molina et al. 2018), increased amount and
severity of substance use (e.g., Warden et al. 2012), future
substance-related disorders (Groenman et  al. 2017), and
relapse and negative clinical outcomes (e.g., Godley et al.
2014a, b; Tomlinson et al. 2004) compared to youth without
comorbid problems. Even more problematic, Evans et al.
(2007) showed an interactive impact of multiple comorbid
disorders rather than simple additive effects. Together, these
findings highlight the need for special attention to maximiz-
ing treatment outcomes for youth with comorbid disorders,
especially at community-based clinics where the vast major-
ity of these youth are treated (SAMHSA 2018).

Pilot research conducted specifically on treatments target-
ing substance and comorbid problems among adolescents
are few in number, with most being uncontrolled and demon-
strating modest results and no follow-up experimental trials
(e.g., Curry et al. 2003; Goldstein et al. 2014; Hides et al.
2010; Kaminer et al. 1998). As noted, well-powered experi-
mental studies have typically not examined psychosocial
treatments for the range of adolescent clients seen in public
sector community mental health centers, although a few have
specifically targeted comorbid substance use and depression.
For instance, Rohde et al. (2014) evaluated sequencing of
a family-based treatment for substance use and group CBT

for depression, finding substance use improved most in the
group receiving substance use treatment first and depres-
sion improved to a similar degree in all groups. Importantly,
however, the two treatments were delivered independently
by separate therapists, rather than as an integrated model.
Such sequential models are poorly suited for community-
based clinics that often lacking the resources and staffing
to provide multiple specialized therapists for each youth.
Riggs et al. (2007) large-scale fluoxetine trial for conduct
disordered youth with comorbid substance use and depres-
sion provided further support for outpatient CBT. CBT for
substance use was provided in both pharmacotherapy con-
ditions, albeit in an academic clinic rather than a commu-
nity clinic setting, with equivalent gains across conditions
in substance use and one depression measure. A recently
published trial of an integrated family-based intervention
delivered in child advocacy centers focused on subthreshold
substance use and trauma-related problems in youth, with
more improvement in days of substance use for the treatment
group compared to usual services, but no group differences
for trauma-related symptoms (Danielson et al. 2020).

Experimental research on outpatient treatments for
adolescent substance use alone is more extensive than the
comorbid treatment literature. Reviews support several
models (e.g., Hogue et al. 2018), with family-based mod-
els consistently found to be superior (Tanner-Smith et al.
2013). Within family-based approaches, inclusion of CBT
and behavioral strategies, rather than a sole focus on family
relationships and communication, is routine (e.g., Donohue
and Azrin 2001; Henggeler et al. 2011; Liddle et al. 2001).
In fact, CBT and behavioral strategies have primarily proven
successful within family-based approaches, with parents
used to support CBT skills and implement behavior modi-
fication at home (Hogue et al. 2018). This is not surprising
given the key role of family in etiology and maintenance of
substance use (Rowe 2012). Further, Hogue et al.’s (2014)
review concluded substance use clients with comorbid dis-
orders benefited more from family treatment than other
approaches.

Experimental research specific to treatments for adolescent
internalizing and externalizing problems individually is more
extensive as well, compared to research for substance use and
comorbid disorders. Adolescent treatments for internalizing
disorders have been the most extensively studied, with reviews
consistently concluding that psychosocial interventions are
robustly beneficial (David-Ferdon and Kaslow 2008; Higa-
McMillan et al. 2016). These reviews provide strong sum-
maries of the literature, identifying various behavioral and
CBT approaches as evidence-based and some approaches that
include a parent component as probably efficacious. Reviews
have highlighted that adolescent treatments for externalizing
problems have been primarily tested in justice-involved popu-
lations, which are more difficult to treat, and treatment effects

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are modest compared to treatments for internalizing behaviors
(Bakker et al. 2017; McCart and Sheidow 2016). Neverthe-
less, similar psychosocial approaches (i.e., CBT, behavioral,
family-based) appear to be promising for adolescents with
externalizing problems. Importantly, effects of psychosocial
interventions are generally not as substantial when evaluated
in real-world settings where dually diagnosed youth are not
excluded (Weersing et al. 2006; Weersing and Weisz 2002).

Since there are few evidence-based adolescent treatments
that could be deployed in public sector community mental
health settings, particularly one that can address a range of
comorbid problems, it is no wonder adolescent treatment
programs are cited as being unprepared to serve such cases
(Hawkins 2009). Thus, we endeavored to develop an effec-
tive integrated model specifically for outpatient providers at
public sector community mental health centers that could be
used to treat a range of comorbid problems in adolescents,
including internalizing, externalizing, and substance use. We
incorporated prior findings establishing CBT and behavioral
techniques as central to treating specific problems and used
a family-based approach. Although family-based approaches
have some logistical challenges (e.g., they tend to be more
complex, parents and adolescents sometimes have competing
goals, some parents are difficult to engage), overwhelming evi-
dence supports the efficacy of such approaches in achieving
and maintaining change, particularly for complex youth pres-
entations (McCart and Sheidow 2016). We used an integrated
instead of a sequential approach (e.g., Rohde et al. 2014).
Integrated approaches are consistently recommended for
outpatient treatment development, especially for adolescents
with comorbid disorders (e.g., Aviram et al. 2001; McCart and
Sheidow 2016), but little research on such treatments exists.

We conducted a randomized controlled trial comparing
an experimental treatment (OutPatient Treatment for Adoles-
cents; OPT-A) to treatment as usual (TAU) through 18-months
post-referral. To ensure high external validity (e.g., community
referral streams, “real world” clients), we conducted the trial
in a public sector community mental health center rather than
a university clinic, with therapists who were employed by the
mental health center delivering the intervention. We hypoth-
esized that OPT-A would produce greater improvement in pri-
mary outcomes (substance use, internalizing, externalizing)
than TAU at both short- and long-term follow-up, as well as
better functional outcomes (parenting, school enrollment) and
therapy process (working alliance, satisfaction, motivation).

Method

Participants

Recruitment

Adolescents were recruited from a public sector community
mental health center. Inclusion criteria were: (a) seeking out-
patient treatment; (b) 10–17 years of age; (c) residing with
a parent/adult caregiver; and (d) per clinic staff, determined
to require treatment for current comorbid substance use and
internalizing (mood or anxiety) disorders. We emphasized
these comorbid disorders because most adolescents in com-
munity mental health centers present with externalizing
problems, and this was an effort to recruit a broader sample
that is typically understudied and more difficult to identify
in community mental health settings. Exclusion criteria
were minimal to maintain a “real-world” sample: pervasive
developmental disorder, psychotic disorder, or severe/pro-
found intellectual disability. To maximize the study’s exter-
nal validity and mirror customary admittance practices for
community mental health centers, the clinic’s assessment
of treatment need was used for inclusion criteria (d). Of
152 youth assessed by the research team and determined to
be eligible, 18 families declined and 134 were randomized
(88% recruitment rate; Fig. 1).

Demographics

Participants were 11.9–17.9 years of age (M = 16.0, SD 1.1)
and representative of the community: 76.4% White, 15.7%
African American, 5.7% more than one race, 2.1% not
reported; 2.1% were Hispanic. Over half were male (62.1%).
A slight majority resided in single-parent homes (52.9%),
and 67.2% of the youth’s mothers were the primary parent.
Families were economically diverse (income: 19% < $10 k,
18% $10  k–$20  k, 33% $20  k–$40  k, 30% > $40  k; 50%
received government assistance). Parents generally worked
full time (49.3%), although some worked part-time (5.2%),
were homemakers or students (12.7%), retired (7.5%), or
unemployed (25.3%). Parental education was: 16.3% < HS
diploma, 26.7% HS graduate, 34.1% some college, 20.0%
college graduate or more. There were no between-group dif-
ferences in demographics.

Procedures

Once clinic staff referred youth, researchers arranged an in-
person meeting at a time and place convenient for the family
to obtain parental consent, adolescent assent, and confiden-
tial baseline assessments. Average length of time between

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clinic referral and study consent was 12 days. Full interviews
were at 3-, 6-, 12-, and 18-months post-baseline; at 1- and
2-months, select instruments (see below) were administered.
Families received $60 for baseline, $40 for each subsequent
full assessment, and $60 total for monthly phone calls to
maintain contact information and collect brief data at 1- and
2-months post-baseline.

Urn randomization was used to balance: (1) sex; (2)
age (10.0–12.9; 13.0–15.9; 16.0–17.9); (3) internalizing

severity (Revised Children’s Anxiety and Depression Scale
[RCADS] borderline clinical threshold T-score < 65 vs
65+); and (4) substance use “severity” (urine screen posi-
tive for < 3 different drugs vs 3+). Age was stratified due
to the expectation that most would fall in the oldest cat-
egory and fewest in the youngest category. An investigator
conducted randomization to keep interviewers blind. IRBs
at the Medical University of South Carolina and the state
Department of Mental Health approved procedures.

Fig. 1 CONSORT participant flow diagram. *The n for specific
measures differed due to adolescents being in detention, residential
treatment settings, etc. Also, some parents were occasionally unavail-

able for assessments even if their youth were available. Intent-to-treat
analyses were utilized

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Assessments

Clinical Outcomes

Data were from baseline and 3-, 6-, 12-, and 18-months
post-baseline. Substance use was assessed using lab-based
7-panel urine toxicology screens (marijuana, cocaine, ben-
zodiazepine, amphetamine, methamphetamine, opiate,
synthetic marijuana). Interviewers took steps to prevent
tampering (see Henggeler et  al. 2011), and adulterants
were lab-tested. Substance use was considered present if
any results were positive. Results were excluded if parents
reported youth medication that would result in a positive
screen.

Internalizing symptoms were measured using the 47-item
youth-reported RCADS (Chorpita et al. 2000), an adapta-
tion of the Spence Children’s Anxiety Scale (SCAS; Spence
1998) developed to closely correspond to DSM-IV anxiety
disorders and major depression. The measure is composed
of 7 subscales (separation anxiety disorder, social phobia,
generalized anxiety disorder, obsessive compulsive disorder,
panic disorder, total anxiety, major depressive disorder) and
a Total scale. Total scale T-scores were used in the current
analyses (Cronbach’s alpha = 0.94). Previous studies have
reported adequate internal consistency, test–retest stability
(Chorpita et al. 2000), and favorable convergent, discrimi-
nant, and factorial validity for both anxiety and depressive
disorders (Chorpita et  al. 2005). The RCADS measures
internalizing symptoms similarly to well established youth
measures of depression and anxiety (de Ross et al. 2002).

Externalizing problems were measured by the par-
ent Child Behavior Checklist (CBCL; Achenbach 1991)
T-scores (Cronbach’s alpha = 0.93). The CBCL has good
inter-rater reliability, test–retest reliability, criterion-related
validity, and convergent and discriminant validity.

Functional Outcomes

School enrollment was reported by parents at 6-month inter-
vals. This variable was coded “1” if youth were enrolled or
had completed their education and “0” if the youth dropped
out or was expelled or in placement. Parent and youth ratings
of parenting were collected at baseline and at 3-, 6-, 12-,
and 18-months post-baseline. The 42-item Alabama Parent-
ing Questionnaire (APQ; Shelton et al. 1996; Zlomke et al.
2014) assesses: Corporal Punishment, Inconsistent Disci-
pline, Poor Monitoring/Supervision, Positive Involvement,
Positive Practices/Reinforcement (Cronbach’s alpha = 0.72
for parent, 0.74 for youth). Two 4-item subscales were added
to capture additional parenting practices specific to adoles-
cents. A rules/expectations subscale assessed enforcement
of household rules and behavioral expectations. An Indirect
Supervision subscale, similar to the Oregon Social Learning

Center Monitoring scale (Brown et  al. 1991), measured
supervision at parties/friends’ houses and parents’ knowl-
edge of the youth’s whereabouts.

Therapy Process

Except for motivation, the therapy process variables were
measured at 1-, 2-, and 3-months post-baseline. Parent sat-
isfaction with treatment was assessed with an abbreviated
consumer satisfaction questionnaire (CSQ; Attkisson and
Greenfield 2004). Three items account for > 85% of variance
and represent general satisfaction, willingness to recommend
the service, and willingness to seek the same services again
if needed (Larsen et al. 1979). Previous studies reported
high internal consistency (Attkisson and Greenfield 2004).
Cronbach’s alpha in the current sample was 0.88. Parental
involvement in treatment was measured using three items
from the Vanderbilt Satisfaction Scale (VSS; Brannan et al.
1996), which assesses the parent’s understanding of and
involvement in treatment, as well as satisfaction with level
of involvement. Cronbach’s alpha for the current sample
was 0.92. Working alliance was measured using parent- and
youth-reports on the 12-item Working Alliance Inventory
(WAI; Horvath and Greenberg 1989), which measures emo-
tional bond and agreement on therapeutic goals and tasks. It
has adequate psychometric properties (Martin et al. 2000),
and both youth and parent reports predict treatment out-
come (Gaudiano and Miller 2006; Hawley and Weisz 2005;
Kazdin and Whitley 2006). Cronbach’s alpha for the current
sample was 0.87 for parent and 0.84 for adolescent versions.
Due to similarities between the goals and tasks subscales,
these were averaged (Agreement on Goals & Tasks), while
Emotional Bond was analyzed separately.

Treatment motivation was assessed at baseline and at
1-, 2-, and 3-months post-baseline, using a 4-item, 4-point
Client Motivation scale informed by other youth treatment
studies (Friedman et al. 1995). High scores indicated more
motivation to change and more faith in treatment. Motiva-
tion to continue treatment was assessed at follow-ups. A few
items focused exclusively on substance use. All parents rated
“how willing are you to help your child cut down on use?”
at the highest level; thus, this item was dropped. For the
youth version, this item was analyzed separately as Motiva-
tion to Cut Down. Two items (“how willing are you/is your
child to receive outpatient services?” and “how confident
are you that outpatient treatment will help you/your child?”)
were averaged for each informant as Treatment Motivation/
Confidence.

Conditions

The two conditions were OPT-A and treatment as usual
(TAU). Both conditions were provided by master’s level

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clinicians employed in the same Child, Adolescent, and
Family Services (CAFS) program of a public sector commu-
nity mental health center. This county mental health center
(i.e., each county in the state has a community mental health
center) is operated by a state Department of Mental Health.
All TAU and OPT-A treatment was paid by Medicaid, pri-
vate insurance, or state funding. Two therapists only deliv-
ered OPT-A, and TAU cases were assigned to therapists not
trained in OPT-A. Therapists agreed to maintain separation
of the conditions, and OPT-A therapists refrained from dis-
cussing cases or OPT-A with colleagues; further, the nature
of OPT-A (i.e., extensive training and monitoring required;
see below) makes likelihood of contamination low.

OPT‑A

The treatment manual is available from the authors. Briefly,
OPT-A is a novel approach to clinic-based treatment that
draws on the Multisystemic Therapy (MST; Henggeler et al.
2009) framework for problem conceptualization and treat-
ment planning (e.g., systemic conceptualization, provider
accountability for overcoming barriers, iterative hypothesis
testing). This framework allows comprehensive conceptual-
ization and treatment of multiple problems simultaneously
rather than sequentially and guides therapists to integrate
specific strategies from evidence-based interventions (e.g.,
CBT, behavior modification, parenting and communication
skills) based on presenting problems of each youth. The
OPT-A supervisor leads treatment planning using the MST
principles and analytical process (see Henggeler et al. 2009),
resulting in individualized regimens such that an identical
set of interventions is not delivered to each case. Treatment
length is criterion-based and dependent on goals being met.
OPT-A sessions occur roughly weekly and average length
was 9.7 months (SD 4.5).

Each session included multiple intervention steps based
on prioritized needs. OPT-A includes traditional CBT tech-
niques (e.g., mood and thought monitoring, identifying
and modifying cognitive distortions, relaxation techniques,
collaborative session agenda setting, use of homework to
reinforce in-session learning; Beck 1995; Friedberg and
McClure 2002) tailored to each youth’s presenting problems.
In OPT-A, these are usually taught both to adolescents and
parents to encourage parents to practice CBT skills with
adolescents between sessions and, ultimately, improve gen-
eralizability. OPT-A also provides families with extensive
behavior modification targeting substance use and exter-
nalizing behaviors (e.g., individualized token-economy
behavior plans including well-defined rules, rewards, and
consequences). For substance use, adolescents submit urine
drug screens in session, and parents are trained to administer
frequent random screens to sustain monitoring and rewards,
similar to procedures described by Henggeler et al. (2011).

Most families receive family communication and parenting
training. Therapists have access to modest funds (< $100/
adolescent) to purchase initial rewards for behavior plans.
Families can choose to continue medication for ADHD
and/or mental health symptoms, and OPT-A therapists are
trained and supervised to coordinate medication monitoring
with the prescribing physician (e.g., 45% were prescribed
medication at the 6-month assessment). A comprehensive
treatment engagement protocol is implemented, based on the
work of McKay (2000) on service provision for outpatient
clinics. Therapists leverage technology (e.g., some sessions
conducted by phone, treatment materials sent via email), and
extensive homework protocols are implemented.

OPT-A was conducted by two master’s level clinicians
employed by the CAFS program. These therapists expressed
interest in serving as study therapists and were chosen by
their clinic director. Therapists were trained and supervised
in OPT-A by the investigators. Each therapist carried case-
loads of up to 12 active clients, and only treated clients
receiving OPT-A as part of this study. They received 65 h
of initial training on OPT-A, followed by intensive supervi-
sion on 2 pilot cases prior to treating study cases. Half-day
booster trainings were provided quarterly. Individual weekly
supervision occurred using web-conferencing. Adherence
was ensured using a system similar to MST’s intensive
quality assurance procedures (Henggeler et al. 2009; Smith-
Boydston et al. 2014), except that supervision was individual
rather than group. Highly structured session notes (focused
on specific session tasks/agendas, intervention outcomes,
and the MST methods for conceptualization, tracking, and
planning) were reviewed by supervisors in advance of super-
vision. Supervisors also reviewed session audiotapes and
materials (e.g., homework, behavior plans, functional analy-
ses). Because OPT-A was in Stage II of development, it was
premature to develop a parent- or client-reported adherence
instrument, typically used at the point when treatment devel-
opers are no longer directly supervising treatment. Instead,
the ongoing MST methods for achieving adherence (i.e.,
weekly review of session notes, tapes, and materials fol-
lowed by supervision and intensive training by developers)
were utilized throughout the trial. No concerns arose regard-
ing OPT-A being delivered as intended.

To confirm adherence, observational coding was com-
pleted on each youth’s taped sessions (744 session tapes
were collected and coded). We used the Therapy Proce-
dures Checklist (TPC; Kolko et al. 2009; Weersing et al.
2002), an assessment that includes 62 items representing the
most common techniques used by community-based thera-
pists in treating youth. TPC subscales represent Behavio-
ral, Cognitive, Psychodynamic, and Family Therapy tech-
niques. Results from this observational coding indicated
that nearly all (97.3%) families received parent manage-
ment and other behavioral techniques and most received

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family therapy (83.3%) and cognitive (73.0%) techniques.
Few (27.6%) received what would be considered psychody-
namic techniques. When looking at the percent of sessions
in which techniques occurred (averaged within category),
the most frequently occurring techniques were family ther-
apy (M = 48.8%), behavioral (M = 36.9%), and cognitive
(M = 34.3%), while psychodynamic techniques were infre-
quent (M = 6.1%). Thus, observational coding, in addition
to the intensive oversight methods used in this Stage II trial,
provided assurance of therapist adherence to the primary
techniques of …

Article review – summary paragraph

In today’s class

We will learn how to write a concise summary paragraph for the article review assignment

We will learn to use reporting verbs and time transitions

We will do a group activity to practice summarizing a passage

Announcements

You will need to complete Task #2 by the end of this week – please have your learning coach check your progress

No class on Thursday, September 30!

Due Date Reminders!

Article Review Virtual Presentation: Thursday, October 7

Article Review Assignment: Monday, October 11

Zoom quiz

As announced, a short quiz will take place on Zoom right now

Summary paragraph structure

State the THESIS STATEMENT OF THE ARTICLE (e.g. what the author argues in this paper) (1 sentence)

Walk the readers through the article by indicating its BEGINNING, MIDDLE, and END (3 – 4 sentences)

** Make sure to include information on types of evidence used and how the author organizes his/her ideas **

Time transitions – how to use them in your summary

Time transition words/phrases will help you to indicate what happens in the BEGINNING, MIDDLE, and END of the article. See the table below

Sample summary using time transitions

First, Walsh begins the article by listing a series of examples from cinema in which Christ-figures are seemingly present.

He then lists reasons why an identification of a Christ-figure may limit the viewers’ understanding of the film as there may be other ways of analyzing it from the perspectives of genre and religion.

Finally, Walsh ends the article by presenting what he calls “a modest proposal”, in which characters are identified and analyzed as Christ-figures to add to the discussion of the films as a whole and not to take over the focus of the film as a theological one.

Importance of adding reporting verbs

The following reporting verbs allow us to state PRECISELY what we mean:

Back to the sample summary –
where are the reporting verbs?

First, Walsh begins the article by listing a series of examples from cinema in which Christ-figures are seemingly present.

He then identifies reasons why a recognition of a Christ-figure may limit the viewers’ understanding of the film as there may be other ways of analyzing it from various perspectives of genre and religion.

Finally, Walsh concludes the article by presenting what he calls “a modest proposal”, in which characters are identified and analyzed as Christ-figures to add to the discussion of the films as a whole and not to take over the focus of the film as a theological one.

verbs to avoid

Show

Make

Writes

Gives

Some frequently asked questions:

How many words should the summary be?

A summary paragraph should be about 5 sentences long (~100 words)

Do I need to indicate that I am writing a summary paragraph by adding a heading?

No. No headings or subheadings are required in this assignment

Can I use quotes from the article in the summary?

No quotes are allowed in the summary paragraph. Use effective paraphrasing techniques to write everything in your own words.

Class activity

You will be placed in a breakout room of 3 – 4 classmates

TOGETHER, you will summarize a passage from The True North

Please come up with a 5-sentence summary, making sure to use appropriate paraphrasing techniques, reporting verbs and time transitions

Things to do:

Begin adding drafts into your Wiki page: You may be able to add your introductory paragraph and the summary paragraph

Make sure to complete as much of task #2 as possible and have your learning coach check your progress

Keep your line of communication open with your 1) learning coach and 2) instructor

Next Monday’s class will also feature a quiz – don’t forget to watch the lecture videos!

ENGL 101:

Article Review Paper –

Introductory Paragraph

& Thesis Statement

Hello everyone, and welcome to your first ENGL 101 class. My name is Heesun Nam, and I will be your instructor for this course. Today, I want to spend some time going through introductions, the course syllabus, as well as the course format.

1

In Today’s Class

What was on the Lecture Video Again?

Topic Sentence

Start Task #2

Thesis Statement (Overall evaluation using evaluative criteria)

Some Quick Questions

Please answer the poll on Zoom!

Announcements

Make sure to go over your article with your learning coach this week

Read the article THOROUGHLY – do not just read the abstract!

DISCUSS the article with your learning coach and BRAINSTORM weaknesses and strengths of the article (if you have not done so already)!

No class on Thursday, September 30 (Day of Learning for Truth and Reconciliation)

Introductory Paragraph

Short (3-4 sentences)

Begin with the general topic of the article/book (=NOT a specific thesis of the article)

Then, add the author’s full name and his or her background/credentials (1 – 2 sentences)

End with the thesis statement

Sentence #1: General Topic Sentence

This sentence lets the reader know what the article is ABOUT (but does not reveal the ARGUMENT of the article)

EXAMPLE: In “A Modest Proposal for Christ-Figure Interpretations”, Richard Walsh discusses the implications of analyzing filmic characters from a Christological perspective.

Sentence #2: Credential of the Author

Who is the author and why should we trust him/her?

3 Es = 3 Ways to Demonstrate Credibility

Education

Experience

Expertise

Credibility Credibility Rating!

Credibility rating (#1 – 5) of a text depends on the TYPE of text

1. Popular source for self-help or entertainment

2. Personal story, testimonial, or narrative (blogs, magazines, pop culture books)

3. News article, magazine article, article from a professional organization; may include research but reported in journalistic or less formal style

4. Scholarly source but written for average reader; includes references and scholarly research such as studies, statistics, and reports.

5. Scholarly source written for advanced academic work; includes references and scholarly research; written in very formal style, with long sentences and difficult vocabulary. This level is written for experts in the field.

Sample ‘Credibility’ Sentence

Walsh is a Professor of Religion in Methodist University with a Ph.D. in biblical studies from Baylor University, and he has authored several books in the areas of religion and film.

Sentence #3: Thesis Statement

Discusses your OVERALL EVALUATION of the article

Do you think the article is strong or weak?

** Remember that you are critiquing the WRITING of the article, not its IDEAS

Discusses both the strengths and weaknesses of the article

Uses SPECIFIC EVALUATIVE CRITERIA to achieve this purpose

Evaluative Criteria: think ‘MEOW’

M ain argument

E vidence

O rganization

W riting style

Questions to Ask:

What is my opinion about the article? Do I think it is strong or weak?

This establishes your OVERALL EVALUATION of the article

What are some strengths of the article in relation to MEOW?

e.g. The article is organized very well so it is easy for readers to follow the logic of its argument

What are some weaknesses of the article in relation to MEOW?

e.g. The article does not have enough evidence to support its argument

Thesis Statement Formula

Although + less important (SVO), overall evaluation, more significant (SVO) + more significant (SVO).

e.g. If your overall evaluation is positive:

Begin with a weakness of the article then add two strengths

e.g. If your overall evaluation is negative:

Begin with a strength then add two negative points

Thesis Statement Samples

1) The overall evaluation is positive (=the article is effective)

“Although the writing style of the article is not suitable for its readers, the article is effective because of its strong main argument and fluid organization”

2) The overall evaluation is negative (=the article is ineffective)

“Although the writing style of the article is captivating for its readers, the article is ineffective because of its insufficient evidence and disjointed organization”

In-Class Activity

Begin working on the first part of Task #2

Homework

Begin Task #2 (the first half – the entire task is due next Friday)

Try writing a summary of the article (e.g. main argument -> three sub-arguments -> examples used)

A lecture video on the summary paragraph will be posted by Friday.

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ENGL 101:

Module 2: Article Review Assignment Instructions & MEOW Criteria

Hello everyone, and welcome to your first ENGL 101 class. My name is Heesun Nam, and I will be your instructor for this course. Today, I want to spend some time going through introductions, the course syllabus, as well as the course format.

1

Today’s Class

A Quick ‘Refresher’ Quiz

Article Review Assignment Instructions

Credibility Ratings

“MEOW”

Begin searching!

Zoom in!

Please check your Zoom for the ‘refresher quiz’!

Article Review Assignment: Part I

Part I: Based on what you have learned from the “Finding Scholarly Sources” lecture video, find ONE scholarly article from the TWU library website. The article must be: 

1) published in the last 15 years (2006 – )

2) a SCHOLARLY article. This means it must have been published by a scholarly journal.

3) be 5 – 20 pages in length. 

4) focus on the topic of MENTAL HEALTH or FREEDOM OF SPEECH

Article Review Assignment: Part II

Part II: Once you have chosen your article, write a 1000-word article review according to the class lessons. Use APA (7th edition) formatting including a title page. Include an introduction with a thesis, a summary, three evaluation paragraphs and a conclusion. No subheadings are necessary.

The body paragraphs should follow the general paragraph pattern for writing and include evaluative discussion. Please follow the instructions for thesis and paragraph patterns from the class materials.

Article Review Virtual Presentation Due Date: Thursday, October 7th (3:45 pm PST)

Article Review Final Draft Due Date: Monday, October 11th (before 11:59pm PST)

What are Credibility Ratings?

Credibility rating (#1 – 5) of a text depends on the TYPE of text

1. Popular source for self-help or entertainment

2. Personal story, testimonial, or narrative (blogs, magazines, pop culture books)

3. News article, magazine article, article from a professional organization; may include research but reported in journalistic or less formal style

4. Scholarly source but written for average reader; includes references and scholarly research such as studies, statistics, and reports.

5. Scholarly source written for advanced academic work; includes references and scholarly research; written in very formal style, with long sentences and difficult vocabulary. This level is written for experts in the field.

What we need for the Article Review assignment is…

An article with a credibility rating of 4 or 5

** we will take some time to do this together today **

Once you find your article…

We have to EVALUATE IT – but how?

We need specific evaluative criteria

Consider the following…

What kind of things do you look for in a good restaurant?

What about for Movies?

Evaluative Criteria for Writing

…differ from the evaluative criteria we might have for restaurants, movies, etc.

In ENGL 101, we call the list of criteria MEOW

What is MEOW?

M ain argument

E vidence

O rganization

W riting style

Main Argument

Is the main idea clearly stated?

Is the argument logical?

Are you convinced by the argument?

Does the writer make any false assumptions or ignore anything?

Evidence

Consider QUANTITY and QUALITY

Does the author have SUFFICIENT information? Enough to prove the main idea?

Does the author have a VARIETY of evidence that is CREDIBLE?

Organization

Is the article structured? Are the contents placed effectively?

Are there subheadings that can help guide the readers?

Do the ideas connect smoothly or are they repetitive and cluttered?

Is the format of the article clearly stated at the beginning?

Writing Style

Does the writing style fit the purpose of the article? The audience?

Ask yourself who your article is written for

Remember that it is a scholarly article – difficult vocabulary / sentence structures are supposed to be there!

Initial Steps to Take

As you choose and read through your article, look for ways to discuss its MEOW.

Consider whether the writing has done an EFFECTIVE or an INEFFECTIVE job

In-Class Activity

Based on the lecture video & today’s lecture, begin searching for an article for your article review assignment

Screen-share will be enabled; please feel free to ask questions about your own journey of searching for the right article!

By Thursday

Please choose your topic as well as the article you will read for the assignment (check all the requirements!)

Watch the Lecture Video on the Introductory Paragraph

Meet with your learning coach and go through the article together (the earlier the better!)

ENGL 101:

Article Review Body Paragraph Pattern

Hello everyone, and welcome to your first ENGL 101 class. My name is Heesun Nam, and I will be your instructor for this course. Today, I want to spend some time going through introductions, the course syllabus, as well as the course format.

1

In Today’s Class

Important Announcements

Body Paragraph Pattern focusing on evaluative discussions

Sample Paragraph

Due dates

Announcements

Quiz on the general body paragraph pattern is today

Article Review Virtual Presentation: Thursday, October 7th

Class will still take place!

Article Review Final Draft: due Monday, October 11th

Please make sure you are writing your draft in your Wiki page

No draft = grade of 0!

Quiz on Moodle

Please go to Moodle to complete the quiz right now!

Please turn on your camera for this quiz

Quiz Password: AR

General Body Paragraph Pattern

**This is the same general body paragraph pattern as taught in WRTG 101**

Assertion – “Plug in” the thesis key words & the paragraph key words

Explanation – Explain WHAT YOU MEAN BY the assertion key words (Transition: “in more detail”, “more specifically”)

Evidence #1 – Introduce a DIRECT QUOTE as evidence (Follow the ICQC rule: Introduce – Contextualize – Quote – Cite)

Discussion #1 – In AT LEAST TWO SENTENCES, talk about the quote then tie it in with your assertion

Evidence #2 – Present another DIRECT QUOTE that demonstrates your assertion

Discussion #2 – In AT LEAST TWO SENTENCES, discuss the quote and how it is connected to the assertion

Connection – Bring all the ideas together and summarize your findings by “plugging in” the thesis/paragraph key words

Sample Thesis Statement

Although the disjointed organization of the article muddles its arguments, Walsh presents an effective article that captures both biblical and cinematic readers because it has ample evidence and a clear writing style.

Sentence #1: Assertion

Evaluative Paragraph Key Word (including adjective) & Thesis Key Word

e.g. ‘disjointed organization’ & ‘effective’

Follow the Assertion Sentence Guide:

First paragraph = ‘although’ = disjointed organization

Second paragraph = ‘however’ = ample evidence

Third paragraph = ‘also’ = clear writing style

Assertion Sentences for Each Paragraph

First Paragraph:

“Although the article has disjointed organization, it is effective because…”

Second Paragraph:

“However, the article is effective because of its ample evidence”

Third Paragraph:

“The article is also effective because of its clear writing style”

Sample Sentence

“Although the article is effective in presenting a new way of viewing Christ-figure films, its disjointed organization confuses its premises”

Which body paragraph?

Sentence #2: Explanation

Ask yourself this question: ‘What do you mean?’

Explain to your readers what you mean by assertion key words (e.g. ‘disjointed organization’)

Mention a general place where the author commits this error

It may be helpful to elaborate on the idea of organization here

Sample Sentence

“More specifically, Walsh’s decision to list various films as examples of Christ-figure films with multiple possibilities of interpretation at the beginning of his article is unhelpful in bringing out his main argument.”

Use a transition phrase (‘more specifically’) at the beginning

Sentence #3: Evidence

Begin with a transition phrase such as “For example” or “For instance”

Include the context of the quote (e.g. where it is placed in the article)

Further include what the author is discussing immediately prior to the quote

Make sure to write down the citation at the end of the quote (Author’s last name, year of publication, page number)

Remember the ICQC rule!

Sample Sentence

For instance, near his introduction, Walsh describes the attempts of some to classify film The Matrix as a Christ-figure film, claiming, “…that interpretation will miss elements that reading Neo as bodhisattva, Platonic philosopher, or Alice in Wonderland might better illumine” (Walsh, 2013, p. 80).

Sentences #4 – 5: Discussion

The most important part of the paragraph!

Have AT LEAST TWO SENTENCES in this section

First sentence: discuss the QUOTE – what does the quote say?

Second sentence: discuss the importance of the quote in relation to the assertion – why is this quote important when we are discussing our assertion?

Sample Sentences

With this in mind, other possibilities of what Neo may represent in the film – “bodhisattva, Platonic philosopher, or Alice in Wonderland” – may lead the readers to misinterpret Walsh’s main argument, instead drawing their focus onto other religious perspectives of this particular film. The fact that Walsh has this specific example in the beginning of the article may further compound confusion on the readers as they may not be entirely clear on why a discussion of this specific film may lead towards his thesis.

Sentence #6: Evidence

We will now add another set of evidence-discussion into our paragraph

Begin the second evidence with the transition “in addition” or “moreover”

The other parts of the evidence sentence remain the same: context within the article, quote, addition of citation (ICQC)

Sample Sentence

In addition, Walsh, at times, makes broad claims about the term Christ-figure itself without elaborating on them. Towards the end of his first section on why it is not helpful to simply label characters as Christ-figures, Walsh explains, “…claims about Christ figures soon become rather trite; they lack enlightenment, interest, and heuristic potential for the analysis of particular films” (Walsh, 2013, p. 82).

Sentences #7 – 8: Discussion

The same rule as the first discussion applies:

First sentence: discuss the QUOTE – what does the quote say?

Second sentence: discuss the importance of the quote in relation to the assertion – why is this quote important when we are discussing our assertion?

Sample Sentences

Clearly, his assertion that the labelling of Christ figures is “trite” is something that needs to be elaborated on further at this point. Instead, the point is simply mentioned and the paragraph ends at that point, and in the next paragraph, Walsh begins to expound reasons why one must still continue to analyze certain filmic characters from a theological perspective. Such a decision to make grand statements as this one takes away from the main argument that is presented in the next section of the article.

Sentence #9: Connection

Make sure you follow the same sentence structure as the assertion

e.g. if first body paragraph, write “although” or “even though”

Include both the thesis key word (=overall evaluation) and the assertion key word (=disjointed organization)

Sample Sentence

Therefore, even though the article is effective, its disjointed organization muddles the main argument and confuses the readers at certain points of the article.

Homework

Begin working on task #3 (body paragraph)

At the end of the task #3, you will see the Drafts Page for the article review assignment – please begin filling it out!

Virtual Presentation will take place IN CLASS on Thursday

Go to your learning coach appointments!

Article Review

A Word on the Conclusion, Grading Rubric,

Virtual Presentation Instructions

Agenda for Today

Concluding Paragraph

Grading Rubric & Checklist for the Assignment

Virtual Presentation Instructions

Announcements

The Article Review assignment is now due on Wednesday, October 13.

Please sign-up for a slot to meet with me before the paper is due (link in chat)

Article Review Virtual Presentation will need to be recorded when I dismiss you today

Presentation will be due at the end of the class

Concluding Paragraph

Summarize your findings

Remember to include a GENERAL RECOMMENDATION (who would benefit from reading this article?)

“This article would benefit those who are studying about Christ figures and their impact on cinematic narratives”

General Checklist for the Assignment

Does your title begin with “A Review of…?”

Did you include a proper APA reference of the article AT THE BEGINNING of the paper?

Do you have an evaluative thesis that follows the format?

Is your summary concise? Does it include proper time transitions & reporting verbs? Have you paraphrased everything?

Do your body paragraphs follow the thesis roadmap as well as the pattern?

Does your concluding paragraph include a general recommendation?

Grading Rubric

See shared screen

But wait!

Instructions for the Article Review Virtual Presentation will follow…

Instructions

You are required to demonstrate your understanding of your Article Review assignment by creating a 3-minute video presentation on Cloud Poodll. This presentation accounts for 5% of the total course grade.

In 3 minutes, you will be required to present your thesis statement (make sure it is in the correct ‘although’ sentence format and includes 3 evaluative criteria as well as the overall impression) and discuss your reasoning behind it.

Some Questions to Consider Answering:

How did you decide on the overall evaluation?

Why did you decide to focus on your specific evaluative criteria?

What was the most challenging aspect of reading the article?

Would you recommend this article to your classmates? Why or why not?

Technical Instructions

Please use the Cloud Poodll button on Moodle to record your video. This is an easier way to record yourself. It will also make the grading much easier for me.

ONLY if you are having issues, you may record on Zoom.

Make sure your camera is ON at all times.

Do NOT make any edits to the video.

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