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this is an argumentative paper demostrate critical thinking 

Are you there? I need to change the instructions. My professor just told me she wants me to start over with my paper. Meaning scrap the original and start over. Please help me. I will raise the amount. She said it will be harder to make the changes as it because in order for me to get a good grade I will have to make major changes. This is exactly what she said….

I think that you should start over because your revisions could take too much time. I know my advice sounds strange, but I just looked at your paper. I see major revisions…. That is directly from my professor. Can I send you the original assignment to start over and forget about what I sent you. I can also send you a website one of my classmates used to help with argumentative papers who got a good report. 

There are other topics that I could choose from that might be easier for you. I can send them to you at your request. It didn’t let me change the price but I extended the time. I will give you a 50% tip if you can get this done for me. Please let me know if you can do this. The current topic is:

What is more important for a leader imagination or knowledge (you must choose and defend only one)? The paper should be no less than 4 pages and no more than 5 pages (Double Spaced, Times New Roman, 1 Inch Margins) 
A completed Final Argument Paper must include the following: A brief outline of the paper, a completed reference page, a complete body of the paper that meets the requirements for the Final Argument Paper. The paper should be in APA format, Times, New Roman, 1 inch margins, double spaced. The Final Argument Paper is designed for students to critically respond to one of the questions listed in the instructions for this assignment. The paper should be no less than 4 full pages and no more 5 full pages double spaced. The paper will be graded according to the following: (25-23 the paper demonstrates a mastery of the critical reasoning process developed in the text. The paper offers an original, defensible argument in response to the proposed problem. It effectively uses valid secondary source material and appropriate examples to support the argument. There are no logical fallacies present) 

Initial instructions

Attached is the paper and outline. I need it revised/corrected based on the professors feedback. Again here is the feedback. Please be sure to complete everything requested by the professor. Thank you!

Because this course is about arguments, you should reconstruct your first paragraph by stating at least two premises leading to a tightly connected conclusion. You mention Steve Jobs as an imaginative leader. Yet, you did not supply how he got his idea. What prompted his imagination for the iPhone? Who is responsible for Kellogg’s success? Who is responsible for CVS’s success? How did their vision lead to the betterment of society.?
I am saying that more specific information about persons would improve your report. You could retain some of your general information before and after you highlight the personal achievements of the three special leaders with imagination. Your in-text citations must match one to one with your Reference list. Do some proofreading; I saw some typos.
You could include your opinions as “In my opinion . . . ” toward the end of your report. Be sure to add page numbers. 

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